Part 2
Layora
took her time that afternoon bathing the wolves. She could not bring herself to
bury them without giving them a proper bath. She had set up camp close by and
made a warm broth for the one surviving pup. Fretting over him all afternoon
she made sure he was warm enough by the fire and gave him as much broth and
water as he desired. After a few initial spills, he began to lap at the warm
liquid and it wasn’t long before he had finished a small bowl to
himself. She was pleased that he had managed to drink a couple of portions
throughout the day and she gently touched the top of his head in reassurance.
He was frail, but it was beginning to look as if the pup had a bit of strength
left in him. His white fur was so soft beneath her fingers and as she caressed
him, she wondered what colour his eyes might be. He was just a little lump of
fur and as she held him to her chest, he slept soundly. She had made sure to look
him over for any injuries and was relieved to have found none.
After a while, she laid the pup on
her blankets inside the tent. She wished to bury the other wolves before it got
too dark and soon she had picked a spot for their final resting place. She used
a small tool she had brought along with her for digging up herbs. It took her a
while, but eventually she was ready to place them inside. She laid them down
together, all nestled against their mother and set to the task of covering them
with the soft earth. Carrying four small rocks from the river’s edge, she
placed the rocks over the packed dirt and sat back on her heels. “I’m so sorry
Mother Wolf; I did not get here in time to save you and your family. But maybe
I can save your little one, or at the very least, show him that he was loved.” Sighing,
she rubbed her eyes and stood, heading back to the fire. In silence, she put
away her cooking things and with a heavy heart, she crawled into her tent. She
stopped short of entering the tent completely, however, and smiled at the sight
before her. The little pup was sprawled out on her furs, deep in slumber.
Closing her eyes for a moment, a deep ache settled into her heart. It was
painful but she could do nothing but try and dismiss it. She lay down next to the
pup, curling herself around the little bundle. She could only hope that he
would still be with her in the morning.
~
Layora awoke to noises that she had
never heard before or imagined that she would ever hear, for that matter. At
first there was just a little bit of rustling, but then the sound of a soft
whimper reached her ears. She sat up and came to realize that the little pup
was nudging her leg. She calmed immediately and reached down to pick the bundle
of fur up. Grasping his middle, she lifted him to her chest. He whined a bit,
but soon calmed and rested against her. He felt so small in her arms and she
tried hard not to hold him too tight. Reaching for her water, she let him have
some from her water pouch and planned to give him some broth as soon as she
could. He squirmed in her arms and pawed at the water pouch as she tilted it
for him. She couldn’t help the bouts of laughter that escaped her
lips. After a little while she brought him out of the tent and set him in a fur
while she went to work packing up her things. He still seemed too weak to get
up and not being able to open his eyes definitely kept him from going anywhere.
Warming the broth while she worked, she tried to keep an eye on the little
wolf. He didn’t seem to be going anywhere and in fact, had
fallen back asleep. It was still rather dark out, but the Sun was slowly rising
and she could see the sky growing brighter as she packed up her tent and the
rest of her belongings.
Layora spent some time feeding the
pup and was unusually pleased when he finally relieved himself. She was
confident that this was a sign that the water and food were helping his
dehydration. All she could do was hope that he would get better. Wiping away
more of the crust that had built up around his eyes was proving to be very
difficult. He whined and squirmed in her grasp and finally gave up for the time
being. She picked up her pack, bow and quiver and gazed down at the pup. She
smiled and gently scooped him and the fur up into her arms, letting him cuddle
up to her chest. She started on her way and soon he was deep in sleep, soft
noises coming from him as he dreamt.
~
Layora spent the majority of the day
walking along the river’s edge and occasionally venturing into the
dense forest to collect some of the berries she saw along the way. She
collected tinder as well for the fires she depended upon and thought of what it
might be like without a flame to keep her warm during the winter and a shiver
worked its way through her. The pup shifted against her and whined softly, he
had felt her shiver uncomfortably against him. Layora stopped and looked down
at the bundle, wanting to make sure that he was alright, “I’m sorry, I
must have startled you. Don’t worry, we’ll be alright.” Layora
smiled and watched as he tilted his head from side to side as she spoke, his
eyes still had not opened. “Do you understand me, little one?” She laughed
and the wolf growled and yipped at the foreign noises she made. She simply
shook her head and held him closer to her. She was beginning to enjoy his
company.
In the afternoon Layora collected
several branches for the arrows she had planned on making over the next few
days. Taking her time choosing the best suited for her arrows, she also spent a
little of her time trying to catch a rabbit or two. She preferred their fur for
the clothing she wanted to make. She knew that she would need a thick coat and
hood to keep her warm and gloves were definitely going to be necessary. Only
another month lay between her and the start of winter and she knew that she
would have to prepare herself for the worst. Glancing down at the wolf in her
arms, she squeezed him tighter, “Maybe the winter won’t be so
dreadful if I have you with me.” The wolf
turned his face up to her, his eyes still tightly shut. He listened to her,
rather content in the woman’s arms and Layora simply smiled and carried
on her way.
~
Soon hours turned to days and days
turned into weeks and with each passing morning, more leaves were to be found
littered upon the ground. That morning she awoke to a soft growling and
smiling, she opened her eyes just a bit. Staring down at her were a pair of
bright blue eyes and she couldn’t hold back her laughter. She reached up to
rest her hands on the wolf’s neck as he stood over her, giving him a
good rub. “Good morning, Snow. How did you sleep?” She
continued to smile as she rubbed the little wolf. She had settled on calling
him Snow because his fur was just that, snow white. He had made a wonderful
recovery since she had found him and after spending almost a month with her, he
had grown quite considerably. He was making his usual play noises and Layora
rolled over onto her stomach, pushing herself onto her knees. The pup stood in
front of her, his tongue lolling out the side of his mouth as he panted. He
wanted to play and soon he was jumping and growling at her. All she could do
was smile and scoop him up into her arms. He seemed to spill over them, now
roughly the size of a small dog. She held him close and nuzzled his face with
her own, sighing against his soft fur. He was calmer now and let her hold him
for a moment longer. Putting him down, she started rolling up her blankets and
putting away her things, wondering if she would be greeted by any snow this
morning.
She had made a warm coat for herself
and with each passing day, she realized how thankful she was for the warmth it
provided. Now that she had come well away from the river, and started heading
farther inland towards the mountains, it was growing much colder. They were
still a great distance away, but she would come across them in another two
months or so, well into the start of winter. Snow had really grown quickly, his
body had gotten stronger and his legs much longer. He was just shy of knee
height now and so fluffy. She absolutely adored rubbing him, his fur was so
soft and always made her feel warm when they cuddled. He now walked beside her
and never wandered away from her side. He seemed to stay intently focused upon
her most of the time and rarely strayed from her side. Perhaps he was
fascinated by her; Layora was definitely intrigued by him.
She absolutely loved to play with
him and she spent much of her time teaching him new things, like when to stop
and listen for other animals nearby. Whenever she withdrew her bow, he knew to
sit and stay very quiet, even when a rabbit darted past, and they did, on more
than one occasion and he wouldn’t move a muscle. She always made sure to
reward him for his wonderful behavior too. He was very gentle with her, but she
never once forgot that he was a wild animal and a wolf no less. She treated him
with the utmost respect and admiration and always tried to keep the wolf in him
strong. He was not to be treated as a pet, but rather, a companion. He may curl
up with her every night, lick her face and play with her, but she was always
mindful of what he would become; a fully grown male white wolf. It frightened
her a little, but she would push it from her mind whenever she could. She loved
him too much to think he might one day harm her. She would do anything she
could to raise him in a loving, nurturing environment and she just hoped it
would be enough to keep him as her companion, without being frightened of
sleeping next to him.
~
Layora had not slept well the
previous evening and was plagued by awful dreams throughout the night. Snow had
lain by her side for much of it, trying to comfort her in any way he could. He
watched as she cried in her sleep and tossed and turned and it wasn’t until he
rested his head on her chest that she began to relax. After a while she slipped
into a deeper sleep and although she did rest for some time, it was not a
fitful sleep. When she awoke, it was in a cold sweat and the Sun had already
risen. She did not care to waste away the day in bed, so she quickly packed up her
things and started off. The day seemed to drag on for far too long and by late
afternoon she had stopped to sit and rest for a while. Sitting down by the tree
line, she gazed up into the treetops. They stood tall all around her and as she
looked up into the canopy of leaves above, calmness came over her. The Sun
played with the shadows as the leaves swayed in the wind. And slowly a frown
began working its way across her features, marring them. Her eyes fell to the
forest floor and soon she shut them tightly, trying to hold it all back. The
nightmares would not stop, not even now. Running her fingers through her hair,
she drew her knees up close to her chest. Her arms moved to hug her knees
tightly and she began to cry.
Snow sat a few feet away from her,
quietly observing the young woman in her distress. She wept and hugged her
knees, her lithe frame shaking with the force of her sobs. All she could think
of was the fire, the flames and screams. All as if it was yesterday. Her
nightmares were always that way and they never failed to bring her back to the
bottom, “Where I
belong.” She
whispered and Snow’s ears twitched at the sound of her voice.
Soon he was standing before her, his nose pressing firmly against her hand.
Almost instantly she stopped crying and raised her head, wiping her tears aside
she tried to compose herself. Looking up at him she gazed deeply into Snow’s bright
eyes. “I’m sorry,” she
whispered and reached out to rub behind his ears. “I must
sound strange making all that noise.” She kissed
his nose gently and stood, picking up her things soon after. “Come on
love, let’s go. I’m sorry for worrying you.” Snow darted
around her and she smiled warmly at him and soon he was racing ahead of her,
trying to coerce her into joining him. She laughed lightly and jogged ahead,
teasing him into believing that she may run with him. He seemed to almost
prance around her, jumping completely up off the ground at times.
Before she knew it she was racing
with him, following close behind and laughing at the way he darted around her. “You’re going to
be so fast one day, Snow!” she cried
as they continued to run together. It was no longer a race, merely a chance to
enjoy something together as they ran side by side, the cold air stinging her
cheeks slightly and turning them a lovely shade of pink. After a while of this
they slackened their pace and came to a slow walk as they reached the edge of a
large clearing that opened to the forest. Snow laid down on a flat rock that
jutted out of the forest floor and Layora came towards him, looking around the
area. It was beautiful here where the forest opened to greet the grassy fields
and soon she was seated next to him on the little rock. She enjoyed the quiet
of being on her own, well almost alone, but she wondered what it might be like
to be among the sounds of other elves. Would their cities be busy and loud or
would they be calm and peaceful? Odd things to think about, but she thought of
these kinds of things often enough. Sighing, she leaned back on her hands, looking
around her at the border of trees. Snow was soon sleeping soundly by her side,
his breathing deep but relaxed and Layora simply smiled and stood, ready to set
up camp for the evening. It was time to call it a day.
~
They both slept soundly, meanwhile,
the wind picked up and the trees swayed around them. Snow was on its way and
they were none the wiser as they lay curled up together, Layora under the
blankets and Snow sprawled out next to her. His ears twitched while he slept
and soft whimpers escaped him as he dreamt. Layora lay peacefully under the
blankets and she too was wrapped up in a dream. A much more pleasant one than
the last, but it was filled with uncertainty and upon waking that morning, she
was overflowing with it. Pulling back the blankets, she got up and put her
things away. She finally bundled up and was ready to leave the tent and as she
turned to crawl out the door, she stopped to meet with Snow’s bright
blue eyes staring back at her. She laughed a bit, “Come on
you, it’s time to
go out.” His tail
was swishing back and forth and she couldn’t help reaching out to rub his head, ruffling
his fur affectionately. He whined happily at her and turned around to leave the
tent. She started untying the knots holding the door together and he slipped out
before she could finish the last knot. Pulling back the flap, Layora’s eyes
widened. Snow stood there looking rather stunned. He was surrounded by a thick
layer of freshly fallen snow. “Oh my,” she
whispered, stepping from the tent. Snow turned and looked at her almost in
question. Layora smiled and shook her head a little. He blended in beautifully
with his surroundings,” I knew Snow
was a perfect name for you.”
After the arrival of the snow,
Layora spent the day earnestly making her way towards the far off mountains.
The snow had stopped falling, but her worries were sending her spiraling. Every
negative thought only made her walk faster. Snow followed her patiently,
enjoying the feel of the cold snow beneath his feet, or so it seemed. He would
prance around her or run just a little ahead every now and then and spread his
paws wide into the snow. Fixing her hood, Layora tried to dismiss some of her
worries and instead focused on training Snow. She had spent a lot of time
teaching him little things like hand signals and a couple of voice commands and
he really did seem to enjoy all the little treats she would give him if he did
well. She decided it would be best to work on his hunting skills today. If she
asked him to ‘hunt,’ he would
disappear a little ways off and when he returned, he would lead her to wherever
he had spotted an animal. Today he had led her to two rabbits. While she would
never kill anything unnecessarily, she liked using these smaller animals as a
lesson. She even let him run after them on more than one occasion. Most of the
time he would return without the rabbit, although he was fast, they could be
faster.
As of late, he had started to
develop a better method of capturing the animals and now when he went after
one, he never failed to bring it back. He was a completely different pup when
he encountered wildlife now and she always made sure to allow him his freedom.
If he wanted to catch something, she would let him. But for the most part, he
simply watched as she would take her bow, notch an arrow, draw the string and
let it fly. They worked well together and although it had taken a lot of
practice, they hunted as a team. Layora was sure that in another month or so,
he would be strong enough to help her take down a small deer if need be.
The day went by much faster than she
would have liked and although she tried to make use of every bit of daylight,
she was still forced to setup camp earlier in the evening as the darkness swept
over them. The freshly fallen snow had scared her when she had awoken that
morning and although she was trying to be optimistic, the bad weather was
making her nervous. Sitting quietly by the fire she took another sip of her
broth, her gaze shifted to look upon Snow. He lay next to her, chewing away at
a couple of chunks of rabbit she had given him and somehow had managed to miss
his vegetables. She gently rubbed his back while he ate; happy that he had
enough trust in her to let her do so. He stopped chewing suddenly and began
sniffing the air, even Layora seemed to stiffen. His ears twitched and after a
moment or so, he stood, staring off into the darkness. Layora had put her bowl
down and was listening intently, her muscles tense, ready to spring at any
moment. They could hear music, or drumming, something loud but very far off.
She slowly stood and smothered the fire carefully, making sure that not too
much smoke was let out.
Biting her lower lip firmly, she
headed in the direction of the sounds. Snow remained by her side and they
walked through the clearing to the North. It seemed to be where the noise was
coming from and as they continued, the steady drumming became louder and
louder. The forest was dense here and she used the shadows to her advantage,
afraid of being seen by whoever might be travelling. The noises however,
sounded far too loud and almost thunderous to be only a small group of people.
Slowly the forest grew sparser, the trees became spaced out and through the
darkness she could see a small hill. Warily, she approached it and upon
reaching close to the top, she lowered herself close to the ground. Crouching,
she made her way right to the top and soon she was lying on her belly, her eyes
wide.
An army was crossing the wide
expanse of the snow covered plains and although quite a safe distance away,
they were loud and getting much louder. There must have been close to two
thousand men coming towards her, they were travelling from the North and if she
didn’t get out
of the way, they would be on top of her in just a few hours’ time. She
watched for a little while, trying to see if they were truly men, as they were
far too loud to be anything else. She went back to pack up her things after
staring at them for a long while. Snow seemed agitated and she did her best to
reassure him that everything was okay. She thought it would be best if she
travelled North in the forest alongside the moving army and then cross behind
them to the East so as to avoid any contact with the strangers. She knew that
she may be close to them at some point and hoped that she could perhaps see
where they may be from.
Shouldering her pack, she started
out into the darkness of the forest and did her best to find her way. Snow had
moved out in front of her after a while and seemed to be leading her through
the trees under the bit of moonlight that filtered down. The noise that came
from the army was terrible and after being in quiet for so long, it started to
wear on her. She rubbed her head a little and nearly tripped over Snow when he
stopped suddenly. Frowning, she went to speak to him but quickly thought better
of it when she saw his ears pricking. Then she heard it; voices. She froze,
unsure of what to do. She wanted to run but quickly dismissed the idea. She
needed to hide and she needed to hide Snow as well. She patted his bum and
motioned for him to follow her.
They went a
little deeper into the woods, looking for a dense patch of trees or shrubbery
to hide amongst and while she looked, the voices grew louder, it sounded like a
small scouting party. She shivered and finally they came upon some shrubbery
that looked big enough to hide them both. She motioned for Snow to stay close
and pulling back the shrubbery a little, she told him to lie down beneath it.
He scooted past her and lay down and soon she was in next to him. She placed
her pack in front of them and pulled whatever she could of the branches and
other shrubbery over top of them and her belongings. Opening her bag, she tried to find her
digging tool but started to panic. The voices were so close and she abandoned the
search and wrapped her arms tightly around Snow, telling him to be very quiet
in the softest whisper she could manage. He leaned against her and she rubbed
his neck a little to reassure him.
The voices
continued and it seemed as if they were just talking casually amongst one
another. There were a total of nine men and they were definitely looking around
and surveying the area, but not really concentrating at their task. Layora was
so thankful of their laxness and relaxed as they slowly started passing her by.
They were about twenty feet from where she hid and Snow was stiff, but showed
no signs of running after them. She kissed his snout and rubbed his back,
trying very hard not to make any noise. With the way the men were shuffling
about, she was pretty certain that they would not be heard.
They passed
her by and shutting her eyes, she breathed a sigh of relief. Snow looked up and
licked her cheek. The small group was well out of earshot now and after a while
of listening, she knew that they were the only scouting party coming for the
time being. Pushing herself up from the ground, she pulled away some of the
brush that hid them and picked up her pack. Snow rubbed his forehead against
her leg and she patted the top of his head gently. It was growing darker and
she realized that staying here may be the best thing for them. It wasn’t likely
that they would encounter any more of the travelers and she knew she could hide
them even better with a little bit of searching. She decided to head away from
the path she had been taking, moving farther West through the forest. When she
was comfortable with the distance she had put between them and the army, she
went to work pulling branches, fallen trees and logs into a small tent
structure. She knew she couldn’t set up her own tent as it might easily be
spotted, but she felt comfortable enough hiding out under the shelter the
forest thus provided her.
~
That night,
Layora and Snow slept beneath their makeshift shelter, huddled together for
warmth. She knew that making any kind of fire would be a bad idea and decided
that they could do without, so long as they bundled up in her blankets. The
army continued to move and although the drumming continued, Layora managed to
sleep through the night. She was exhausted after having nearly run into the
group of men and it had gotten very late by the time she felt well enough
hidden away to sleep. Snow had had trouble falling asleep and even when he had
finally managed to, his ears twitched throughout the night with the sounds of
the moving army. They did not cease their marching and continued on through the
night. It wasn’t until morning that Layora awoke to the
sound of horns. She jumped from her hiding place in fright and even Snow had
sprung into action and was growling terribly in the direction of the sounds.
The army had passed them by still at a great distance, but their horns had not
been heard before. Now they refused to cease. After a few minutes, Layora had
collected herself enough to pick up her things and they started towards the
tree line. She wished to see how far the army had passed them and whether it
would be safe enough to cross behind them to the East.
As she
approached the edge of the forest she grew nervous, although the army had moved
on, there was still a chance that there may be stragglers or another group
following. She told Snow to sit still with her pack and proceeded to climb up a
nearby tree. Snow watched her curiously, as he had never seen her climb before.
He made little noises and paced around in the spot she had left him and when
she looked back, she smiled at him, “It’s okay, Snow. I’m alright, just rest.” He sat back
down and pawed at the ground for a moment before he finally lay down. Layora
continued through the trees, swiftly moving from bough to bough. She had her
bow and quiver with her and was careful not to lose either of them as she made
her way closer to the edge of the forest. She heard no noises and as she came
to the very edge, she gazed out across the large expanse of the open snow
covered fields. There were thousands of tracks through the snow and they left
much in their wake. Pieces of wood, garments and other items littered the
ground.
She shook her head gently and
scanned the area as far as she could see, no one remained and she sighed with
relief. Slipping down from the branch she had stood upon proved an easy feat
and soon she was walking back towards Snow. She came upon him while he was
rolling in the snow and laughing she approached him. The moment he had heard
her laugh, he sprang to his feet and quickly sat down where she had told him to
earlier. Layora smiled and shook her head, “You are such a sweetheart.” His ears
pricked and he tilted his head, listening to her voice. She placed her hand
upon the wolf’s head and gently scratched behind his ears.
Looking out towards the tree line, she knew that they would have to continue on
their way. She wondered at who the army served, as she had never seen banners
like theirs. Their banner symbol was a red bird with a half-moon shape to the
right. She had drawn it out in her sketchbook so as to not forget it and
thought that it was such an interesting symbol for a ruler to use and she
wondered at what they might be like.
She had been very frightened of
them, but she did not know if it was because they were men or because they were
so many. She was afraid of humans and of having to make contact with them at
all, but sooner or later she would have to face some kind of civilization.
Sighing inwardly she shook her head and shouldered her pack, “Come on,
Snow. It’s time to
go.” They walked
quietly together until they reached the edge of the forest and after taking a
few minutes to make sure they were still clear, they started to run. Layora had
not wanted to take any chances and decided that running to the other side of
the valley would be their best option. So they ran together, Layora’s cheeks
burning from the cold and Snow’s heavy breathing at her side. It was a wide
valley and after almost ten minutes of running, they finally reached the other
side where a very steep hill thus greeted them. It was much steeper than she
thought and although she started at a quickened pace, she was forced to slow
and pull herself from rock to rock at certain points. After a while of this
they had finally reached the top of the embankment and sat down in a huff.
Snow sat beside her and started
licking her face as she had lain back on the snow covered ground. She laughed a
little and pulled her water from her pack, taking several sips from the bag.
She pulled out a bowl and emptied some of the water into it for Snow and he
readily drank from it. She rubbed his back for a few minutes and looked out into
the valley below, her gaze turning South. She did not see the army; she only
heard the faint rumbling of their far off drums. Deeply thankful for this, she
got up and put away the bowl and water flask. Scratching Snow on his back, she
then started on her way, he walking close beside her.
4 comments:
Looks great! A couple minor suggestions, the repeat of the phrase "most certainly" twice in a short span struck me as awkward. Other thing is it's odd for pups to be so young so close to the start of winter. Perhaps a quick comment on it from the protagonist, if it doesn't affect the flow. Keep it up!
Thank you for the feedback. ^_^ I've edited the phrase, I have a habit of adding that silly phrase in when it's not needed. I also didn't even think about the age of the pup being odd a few months towards winter, but you're right. It is a bit strange. I will have to go back and do a bit of editing.
Love it so far. Love the realism with the wolf, I can picture you petting your puppies as I read this.
My only comment is with this sentence, "She watched for a little while, trying to see if they were truly men for they were far too loud to be anything but." I know what your getting at here, that they must be men bc they are too loud. Though the phrasing seems off. Maybe "She watched for a little while, trying to see if they were truly men, though they were far too loud to be anything but." With though instead of for. Not sure if that helps. I just found myself having to read that sentence twice to grasp it.
Otherwise keep it going! I want to know what happens :)
Thank you so much, Tiffy. I will definitely go back and revise that when I have a moment. I really do appreciate any and all feedback and don't worry! An update is in the works!
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